Raffaella Ferretti
1 min readMay 7, 2020

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I liked your article and I found it rich with information. You provided various ways to solve the skin problem and explained how you followed a solution you found working for yourself.

I can’t say anything about your writing and topic, but only about the formatting:

  • the title is not in capitalized letters as requested by Medium requirements for curation;
  • the title should be more descriptive of the content and its intent;
  • in the text, I think there are too many bold words, which I think Medium practices are not so fond of… they look for simplicity, order, and clean text.

For the rest, I can’t say anything and, please, take my comment with pliers — as we say in Italian — because I have never broken through the wall of curation!

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Raffaella Ferretti
Raffaella Ferretti

Written by Raffaella Ferretti

Life always surprises me when I look for direction and measure. Writing poems and stories, Editing respectfully, and Teaching children. In the holistic sphere.

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